Swaying

by Marshall Hryciuk, Merilyn Peruniak, Jessica Tremblay, Michael Dylan Welch, David Ash, Helen Baker, DeVar Dahl, Lin Geary, Vicki McCullough, Karen Sohne, and Winona Baker


Published in Haiku Canada Review 3:2, October 2009, pages 39–42. Begun 10:15 p.m., 16 May 2009 at the Haiku Canada weekend in Vancouver, British Columbia, and completed at 1:30 a.m. on 17 May 2009, led by Marshall Hryciuk [Haiku Canada Review incorrectly lists 18–19 May].



Douglas firs

slow in their sway

over the campus garden Marshall


in the meltwater

all the little suns Merilyn


she tries on

a polka-dot dress—

strapless Jessica


we run out of M&Ms

before prairie Michael


cranberry harvest—

the professor looks out

a thousand tired eyes David


moon shell

light through the curtains Helen


Halloween night

a case of tomatoes

dropped on the loading dock Michael


a firetruck

with way too many firemen Jessica


empty desks

the smell of kids

still in the air DeVar


walking the beach

her bikini strings me along David


in the glass bottle

a shipwreck

and a mermaid Jessica


first visit to Copenhagen

all the gorgeous blondes Merilyn


back row of the balcony

the two of us

and his mother Lin


the number she gave me

runs in the wash Michael


houseboats rise

with the river—

snapping asparagus stalks Vicki


prom night

limos circle the neighbourhood Karen


yellow roses in her corsage

drinking gin

in the parking lot Vicki


the broken spring

dashes my hopes Michael


the money wasn’t important to mention Jessica


Oh to be on YouTube

now that Taser’s here Lin


New Year’s Eve

karaoke machine

hell on earth Helen


removing stuffing

when my water breaks Winona


the in-laws bring

their Gamelan version

of “Auld Lang Syne” Lin


her spam blocker

allows his email DeVar


talking her into

another morning

late for work Karen


shortest day of the year

even the sake seems chilled David


the snow fence moved

to keep the drift

off the driveway Michael


draining the garden hose

my freezing fingers Merilyn


the last bee on the sweet potato David


old fishing village—

a spider’s web gathers

the moon Michael


25th anniversary

patching the wedding quilt David


filament broken in the light bulb Merilyn


he cheers just as loudly

for the instant reply

empty beer cans DeVar


tray of seedlings

sprinkled with slug bait Karen


lawn tennis

hunting for the ball

in pink heather Vicki


between skyscrapers

Venus rising Michael