Haiku Lessons

First published in Bacopa Literary Review 2019, pages 132–133. The same issue also includes the sequences “Still I Go” and “Shēngxiào.” Originally written in April of 2013, on the road between Mt. Vernon and Everett, Washington. See also “Three Haiku Sequences,” with my commentary on this sequence that also appeared as a guest posting on 15 January 2020 on the Bacopa Literary Review Editors’ Blog.


rainy season—

an adjective noun

prepositions the noun



     midday heat—

     I verb the noun

     to verb my noun



          empty café—

          another noun

          verbing the noun



               the noun on our nouns

               gerunding when we verb—

               winter solstice



                    yard sale—

                    noun enough now

                    to verb my noun



                         equinox—

                         the noun of nouns

                         under the noun



                              winter night—

                              fragment with verb

                              participles a noun



                                   morning haze—

                                   the adverb verbs

                                   all of my nouns



                                        summer rain—

                                        I verb my intellectualization

                                        over nouns



                                             army fatigues . . .

                                             she verbs me my noun

                                             under the metaphor



                                                  noun after noun after noun—

                                                  church bells

                                                  verb article noun



                                                       cliché—

                                                       juxtaposition

                                                       surreal noun



                                                            nature image—

                                                            my thought about it

                                                            keeps on verbing