First published in Frogpond 17:1, Spring 1994, pages 33–36. I’m forgetting the complete details of how this renku was composed, but I know it was written at least partly through postal mail, and I believe partly at a meeting of the Haiku Poets of Northern California and at an Asilomar haiku retreat with the Yuki Teikei Haiku Society (both meetings probably in 1993). Hal Roth received the renku periodically and shepherded it on to its next destination.
a kasen renku coordinated by Hal Roth
rain at dawn
a deer hunter’s orange coat
shines through the trees Hal Roth
a sharp hoofprint in moss
at the edge of the meadow Elizabeth Searle Lamb
letter read,
he holds it, tense,
and rereads it Hiroaki Sato
washing the child’s feet
she finds a sliver Terri Lee Grell
through the crescent moon
on the outhouse door,
moonlight Jerry Kilbride
unlocking my diary—
pungent eucalyptus leaves Ebba Story
winter wind—
the rusted weathervane
still points west Michael Dylan Welch
under the patchwork
kneading my toes in the cat’s fur Kimberly Cortner
dark still—
a neighbor’s rooster, again
recalling the dream Christopher Herold
on the tip of my tongue
name of that man who passed L. A. Davidson
the infant’s grave
a forgotten memento
reflects the sun Hiroaki Sato
on the dry sink
his wedding ring encircles mine Sandy Roth
mushrooms
in this magic place—
and dancing Elizabeth Searle Lamb
clams eaten, her nude
body, the moon, fogged Hiroaki Sato
dressed to kill
she sits on a tack
for the lie detector Terri Lee Grell
hell’s angels cross a faultline
south out of salinas Jerry Kilbride
to the pacific
dunes carry
buckwheat flowers Lequita Vance
hazy sky—
the white sound of crashing surf Michael Dylan Welch
batik brush
black seeps in the crack
in cold wax Jane Reichhold
sand dabs frolicking
to an unheard melody Pat Shelley
on a nearby hill
teenagers meditating
near the autumn sea Jerry Ball
gold leaf peels from the buddha
cicada shells Margaret Chula
young man and woman
stand up to leave small pond
it must be one o’clock Kiyoko Tokutomi
anchor splashing
a bat swoops between the stars Ebba Story
landscaping finished
the gas company backhoes
through new-laid sod L. A. Davidson
pools of darkness gather
owl to owl to moon Hal Roth
an average ring
on the fresh oak stump
the year I was born Hal Roth
falling snow covers
all the rough edges Elizabeth Searle Lamb
cerulean eyes
framed by a rose
and golden hair Hiroaki Sato
king tut’s mask
a foot from my face Jerry Kilbride
playing beach volleyball
that girl
with Birkenstock tan lines Michael Dylan Welch
carefully around the rocks
the monk rakes a sea Christopher Herold
at the right moment
tripping the hay release
to match the last windrow L. A. Davidson
this final aster
without scent Hal Roth
from panpipes
a haunting melody
twilight Elizabeth Searle Lamb
he returns to his wife
with his smile renewed Hiroaki Sato