First published in the Tanka Society of America’s TSA Newsletter 4:3, September 2003, pages 13–14. These tan-renga were written on 30 June 2003, at the Tanka Society of America’s “Tanka Day,” at which I led a lunchtime exercise inviting everyone present to write tan-renga with one or more partners. The following are three tan-renga to which I contributed. At the end is my introductory text to all 21 tan-renga that appeared in the TSA Newsletter. See also “An Introduction to Tan-Renga.”
She keeps trying
to cross the street, mother
with two toddlers—
Penny Harter
The Age of Innocence
falls from her diaper bag
Michael Dylan Welch
~ ~ ~
there is time
for one more
question
John Stevenson
do I dare
disturb the universe?
Michael Dylan Welch
~ ~ ~
long business lunch—
I lick the fork again
for a faint taste of blueberries
Michael Dylan Welch
the deal is sealed
with our handshake
John Stevenson
At the TSA Tanka Day, a lunch-time assignment was for all attendees to write tan-renga together. A tan-renga is the same length as a tanka, but collaboratively written by two people, much like the first two verses of a renku (the hokku and the wakiku), where the second verse links with the first, yet shifts away in some manner. After the lunch break, we held a round reading of the many tan-renga that everyone wrote. The following is a selection of these collaborative poems, as submitted by the participants. As a variation on tanka, and in the spirit of collaboration, you might want to try writing tan-renga with other poets.
—Michael Dylan Welch