The following brief commentaries first appeared in Favorite Haiku, Volume 2, Winchester, Virginia: Pond Frog Editions / Red Moon Press, 1999, page 38 (for “low tide”) and Favorite Haiku, Volume 3, Winchester, Virginia: Pond Frog Editions / Red Moon Press, 2000, page 27 (for “making a wish”).
low tide—
sand filling
the anemone
Lasceles Abercrombie wrote: “The poet’s business is not to describe things, or to tell us about things, but to create in our minds the very things themselves.” But time like the river is ever in flow, and a haiku poet is expected to show but a glimpse of fleeting life. In the first of these selections, we gain a quick look at a flower-bright polyp before it is glutted and shrouded with sand.
making a wish
on a falling star
no—a satellite
William Higginson wrote of this poem: “In senryu, nature always points back at the human situation.” It offers a lively “Aha!” experience, as the impressions of our peripheral mind so often do.
—H. F. Noyes