In the spring of 2025 I judged the haiku category for the 2025 Lyrical Iowa poetry contest, sponsored by the Iowa Poetry Association. From 122 entries by poets throughout Iowa, I chose the following three top winners, three honorable mentions, and six additional haiku to publish in their annual journal. I omitted several potential winners when I was informed that no poet could have more than one poem selected (all poets were anonymous to me). My selections, but not the following commentaries, appeared in Lyrical Iowa 2025: Our 80th Year, published by the Iowa Poetry Association in October of 2025. In the journal, one poem was incorrectly included that I had not selected, so I have omitted it here. See the 2025 submission guidelines and judges’ bios. See also the “2024 Lyrical Iowa Haiku Contest” results.
Michael Dylan Welch, judge
fall time change . . .
I shush a little voice chattering
in the dawn light
Ashley WolfTornabane, Storm Lake, Iowa
There’s a momentary mystery to this poem. What is the source of that little voice chattering at dawn? It is surely a bird that wouldn’t know of the time change in human clocks. The dawn is still the dawn, and that’s what’s gotten the bird to chatter. The human observer hasn’t yet adjusted and so tries to shush that temporary and unexpected annoyance.
the mourning doves
call to each other
from separate farmsteads
Mike Lindseth, Primghar, Iowa
The plaintive sound of mourning doves often serves to attract a mate. But in this poem, the doves may also be perceived to lament vanishing farmsteads, as farming becomes increasingly corporate. Maybe one day these doves and their family farms will become a thing of the past. But for now, we can still hear them call.
windstorm
treehouse memories tumble
to the ground
Roberta Beach Jacobson, Indianola, Iowa
One probably won’t lose the memories of one’s childhood treehouse just because the tree falls in a storm, but it can feel like those memories are fragile. At the very least, for that moment it feels like that treehouse is all those memories.
first day of college
students standing in line
for cotton candy
Angela McGlothlen, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
Despite reaching the milestone of heading off to college, these students are still kids at heart, and their college knows how to reach them. Let’s hope the students stay young into old age. I appreciate the touch of humor in this poem with its vivid and immediate images.
my face wheels around
to catch the westering sun—
field of sunflowers
Talbot Hook, Newton, Iowa
Here a person is doing what the sunflowers do—turning to face the sun. Facing the sun feels optimistic, so no wonder we often have a fascination with sunflowers. The “w” sounds in this poem also give it a pleasing euphony.
exhausted farmer
leans against frozen barn door
windchill ten below
William Dall, Dubuque, Iowa
This feels like a deeply Midwest predicament. I’ve never worked on a farm but I know those cold temperatures (and much colder). We don’t know why the farmer is exhausted but it’s easy to imagine that he or she has been tending to cows or other chores, only to discover that the barn is frozen shut. But we also know that the farmer will figure out a resourceful solution to this predicament, despite tiredness.
pokeberry poison
grows in my flower garden
inked words on a page
Pat Bieber, Muscatine, Iowa
hot breeze three geese
drink from puddles
at the car wash
Virginia Mortenson, Des Moines, Iowa
strand of golden hair
gently, it tickles my cheek
a kiss blown from you
Devin Creek, Calmar, Iowa
Leaves cover the yard,
A rake rests six feet beyond
Memorial garden.
Rosella Myles, Des Moines, Iowa
birds in March
sing of surrender
you walk away
Sharon Ruth Hensley, Urbandale, Iowa
One additional poem incorrectly appeared in the haiku section of Lyrical Iowa 2025, but it was not a poem I selected for inclusion, so I have omitted it here.