Haiku Checklist

“I’m sure that writing isn’t a craft, that is, something for which you learn the skills and go on turning out. It must come from some deep impulse, deep inspiration. That can’t be taught, it can’t be what you use in teaching.” —Robert Lowell

“The first discipline is the realization that there is a discipline—that all art begins and ends with discipline,
that any art is first and foremost a craft.” —Archibald MacLeish

“There is something beyond Craft where poetry is concerned. Has to be. Otherwise a mastery of craft

would mean a mastery of the poem.” —Terrance Hayes, Poetry Foundation online, 5 June 2006

“If one really wishes to be master of an art, technical knowledge of it is not enough.
One has to transcend technique so that the art becomes an ‘artless art’ growing out of the Unconscious.”

—D. T. Suzuki, in his introduction to Eugen Herrigel’s Zen in the Art of Archery

For haiku inspiration, look closely at everything around you in nature, at home, at school, and at work. Write your haiku first, letting yourself be free and creative. Then ask the following questions about your haiku to help you improve them.

• 1. 1. How long is your haiku? It’s usually good to write in three lines of about 10 to 17 syllables. In English, haiku don’t have to be in the pattern of 5-7-5 syllables—the following questions are much more important.

     2. Does your haiku name or suggest one of the seasons—spring, summer, fall, or winter? In Japanese, a kigo or “season word” tells readers when the poem happens, such as saying “tulips” for spring or “snow” for winter. This is one of the most important things to do in haiku.

     3. Does your poem make a “leap,” by having two parts? In Japanese, a kireji or “cutting word” usually cuts the poem into two parts (never three). It’s not just having two parts that matters, though. Rather, it’s the implication in the relationship of the two parts that matters. Giving your poem two often fragmentary parts is also one of the most important goals in haiku.

     4. Is your haiku about common, everyday events in nature or human life? To help you do this, describe what you experience through your five senses.

     5. Does your poem give readers a feeling? It can do this by presenting what caused your feeling rather than the feeling itself. So others can feel what you felt, don’t explain or judge what you describe.

     6. Is your poem in the present tense? To make your haiku feel like it’s happening right now, use the present tense.

     7. Did you write from your own personal experience? When you write other kinds of poetry, you can make things up, but try not to do that with haiku. Memories are okay, though.

     8. How did you capitalize or punctuate your poem? Haiku are usually not sentences (they’re usually fragments), so they don’t need to start with a capital, or end with a period (the word “haiku” is also not a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalized, and the word is both singular and plural, so saying “haikus” for the plural is usually avoided).     +

     9. Does your haiku avoid a title and rhyme? Haiku are not like other poems, which may have these things. Haiku don’t have titles and rarely rhyme.

     10. What can you do with your haiku? Can you illustrate them, collect them in a notebook, or display them? You could write haiku in your journal every day, enter them in a contest, publish them, or share them at a poetry reading or online.

With practice, you won’t need to ask yourself these questions about your haiku. Japanese haiku master Bashō said to “learn the rules and then forget them.” What I believe he meant was that it’s good to internalize the rules (or targets, as I like to call them) so thoroughly that you no longer have to think about them, the way a chess grandmaster no longer thinks of making bad moves, let alone moves that are not allowed. Have fun with your haiku and enjoy noticing life more closely through your five senses!

Comments or questions? Please contact Michael Dylan Welch.