In the spring of 2024 I judged the haiku category for the 2024 Lyrical Iowa poetry contest, sponsored by the Iowa Poetry Association. From 167 entries by poets throughout Iowa, I chose three top winners, three honorable mentions, and nine additional haiku to publish in their annual journal. I omitted several potential winners when I was informed that no poet could have more than one poem selected (all poets were anonymous to me). My selections, but not the following commentaries, appeared in Lyrical Iowa 2024: Our 79th Year, published by the Iowa Poetry Association in the fall of 2024. In addition, I was able to read my commentaries on 8 October 2024 on a Zoom meeting announcing and celebrating all the 2024 poetry winners. To see a 97-minute recording of this online meeting, visit the IPA Live page and look for the 8 October 2024 event (I'm introduced by Marilyn Baszczynski at the 1:06:40 mark, and my part goes from 1:08:58 to about 1:20:08, and includes my reading of a couple of longer poems). See also the 2024 submission guidelines and judges’ bios.
Michael Dylan Welch, judge
quiet snowstorm
the muted colors
of a barn quilt
Mary Ann Conley, Marion, Iowa
Such gentleness in this poem, despite the storm. Barn quilts are not quilts that one could warm you in bed or on a couch. Rather, they’re bright geometric patterns painted onto barns, an Americana folk art. The gentle snowfall is muting the painting’s normally vibrant-looking colors, and yet the painting can still be seen, a beacon of brightness and creativity. We can hope that this barn is seen from a safe place indoors, perhaps under a cozy quilt.
maple
turning
red
sky
at
night
Del Todey Turner, Waterloo, Iowa
A change of season and a change of weather. The word “red” operates as a pivot in this poem, as part of the phrases “maple turning red” and “red sky at night.” The vertical arrangement of the words helps to facilitate this twist of meaning. As the saying goes, a red sky at night is a sailor’s delight (meaning good weather in the morning), and perhaps the maple’s color change also suggests a positive autumn and holiday season ahead.
hometown Thanksgiving:
we laugh together
as adults
Angela McGlothlen, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
It’s another family gathering at Thanksgiving, but this one comes with a realization that siblings (as I see this poem) are now adults—or acting as adults even if they had already been adults for a while but hadn’t acted that way. This poem is at once buoyant and melancholy.
chinaberry fire
early morning’s
brilliant light
Julie Allyn Johnson, Norwalk, Iowa
If you’re not familiar with chinaberry, it’s worth looking it up online to see images of its refined and fragrant flowers. Their energy matches the morning light’s brilliance.
covered bridge
clinging for dear life
honeysuckle
Shelly Reed Thieman, West Des Moines, Iowa
I see this honeysuckle as overgrowing the bridge in some way, but that might not be the case. If it is, the honeysuckle may not be as old as the bridge, but it seems old enough to have become heavy, threatening to fall from the bridge on which it might be growing. But not yet! And perhaps that honeysuckle is helping to keep the old bridge up.
smell of fresh-cut hay
permeates my evening walk
Iowa summer
Bryan Tabbert, Osage, Iowa
The smell of hay is bound to make every Midwesterner nostalgic. How pleasing to experience this familiar and perhaps comfortable smell on a summer evening.
breathe in
trumpeter swans
sound the year
Angela Evans, Johnston, Iowa
The first line here may seem to be an instruction, but it’s also an action, not just breathing in a breath but breathing in the sound of those swans, perhaps at the start of a new year.
watched by a cold moon
third-generation angler
on the Aegean
Roberta Beach Jacobson, Indianola, Iowa
We are transported from the prairie to the sea east of Greece. Perhaps the poet now lives in the Midwest and is also seeing that same moon, remembering family heritage.
rustle of bamboo
outside my mother’s kitchen
the sounds of mourning
Patricia E. Noeth, Iowa City, Iowa
The distinctive sound of rustling bamboo does have the sound of mourning, doesn’t it? It’s possible to imagine that the mother here has passed away.
A lone saxophone
Softly plays in the moonlight
Midnight in Harlem
Sarah Ann Meeker, Ottumwa, Iowa
wings caught in web
struggle
to nowhere
Virginia Mortenson, Des Moines, Iowa
after a glimmer
between darkness and dreaming
the mist disappears
Craig Running, Decorah, Iowa
four-week-old kitten
tumbles ’round the sun-drenched porch
chasing its shadow
William Dall, Dubuque, Iowa
A farmer
tosses wheat seed in fields
black birds
Virginia K. Westbrook, Des Moines, Iowa
daybreak calm
loon skimming sapphire lake
vanishes
Janvier Abramowitz, Coralville, Iowa