From How to Haiku / Writing Haiku

a new face on TV—

the regular weatherman

under the weather

We all know the expression “to be under the weather,” which means to be sick. It is almost a cliche, an overused word or phrase. It probably originally meant that someone became ill because of bad weather. But by applying this phrase to someone who is an expert on the weather, the phrase comes alive in an amusing way. And we also might be amused because, unconsciously, we might wonder why someone who is an expert on the weather could be “under the weather.” [pages 54–55]

at his favorite deli

the bald man finds a hair

in his soup

The obvious incongruity of a bald man finding a hair in his soup naturally produces the humor in

[this] senryu. But we also might be amused by the fact that for once a diner in a restaurant can be absolutely sure that it is not his hair in the soup. [page 60]

morning sun—

all the patio tables

shining with new rain Paul O. Williams

church bells

church bells       Michael Dylan Welch

Notice how the first link here . . . resembles haiku. [It] could in fact be considered a more or less successful haiku. But a main point of linking poetry is to have the first link provide a strong base for the links that follow. . . . Notice how the connection in both links here is extremely optimistic if not ecstatic. The first link creates the image of a glorious day with all sorts of promise—the sun is shining and everything is glistening with fresh rain, as if, to stretch the imagery, newly baptized. The second link carries this mood into a more specific image of affirmation through purely sound imagery by repeating the phrase “church bells,” as if the actual bells are repeating their tone. Perhaps it is Sunday morning and the bells are calling people to worship. Perhaps someone is getting married and the bells are announcing this joyous event. Whatever the occasion, we feel the jubilant nature of both links. [pages 131–132]